Faking It by Simon Parker - Short, Drama - Convincing her boyfriend to fake an injury for a cash payout, this couple are each holding a secret that the other one will soon learn. 6 pages - pdf format

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Well, that was brutal.

Reminded me of that movie Misery a little bit.

I thought this was good, I immediately felt for Ashley, and how she was being played by Michael. I thought you did a good job with the characters, as well as highlighting Michael's greed.

I don't have much bad to say about this.

Well done, keep it up.