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Posted by: Don, August 20th, 2019, 12:30pm
The Incredibly, Almost Made Up True Story Of Thorton T. Thorton by Richard Rivera - Comedy, Satire - The richest man in the history of mankind manages to produce the most offensive programing in television history -- and have the world declare war on him. 105 pages - pdf format
Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, August 21st, 2019, 11:33am; Reply: 1
Hi Richard
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THORTON (CONT'D) A surprise blood test, however, does.
That made me laugh.
The title and logline piqued my interest - will try and read some more later and give my thoughts.
Matt
EDIT: tried to read some more but it's not to my taste - good luck with it though
Posted by: velera, September 1st, 2019, 8:27pm; Reply: 2
Thanks for your comment I’m performing a MAJOR rewrite and I’ll anniunce it here.