Woman's Work by Christine Locker & Lee Ann Riddle - Short, Drama - An overworked housewife uses an intentional mistake to teach her overbearing husband a lesson. 6 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hey,

This reads well, but some of the dialogue may need to be proof read. Dustin has a line near the end of the script that had me reading it multiple times, trying to make sense of it.

I think I understand your story, but it didn't come across very clear.

I think with some touch ups, this could be even better than it already is.

Keep it up.