The Trapper's Wife by April J. Miller - Drama - In the 1793 Minnesota frontier, a trapper brings home a willful and abused wife and, through patience, sacrifice, and many adventures, helps her to heal. 125 pages - pdf format

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Quoted Text INT. CABIN - MINNESOTA - PREDAWN SUPER: MINNESOTA WILDERNESS 1831 Barely visible by the fireplace glow are two sleeping forms. With a loud THUMP, a HUGE DOG jumps onto the bed. He treads carefully between the two figures and pushes one with his nose. A hand comes up to swat him away. An irritated female voice mumbles.

A SUPER is short for superimposed. So generally, it doesn't follow a header - it follows a description. Something like:

INT. CABIN - PREDAWN

One room. Barely visible by the fireplace glow are two sleeping forms.

SUPER: MINNESOTA WILDERNESS 1831

With a loud THUMP, a HUGE DOG jumps onto the bed. He treads
carefully between the two figures and pushes one with his
nose. A hand comes up to swat him away. An irritated
female voice mumbles.