Love On Camera by Jim Duncanson - Short, Drama - A daughter finds love is ever enduring after she spends a night in her deceased parents’ home. 6 pages - pdf format

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Very touching.

One nitpick: the sentence "Andrea is worried about her Dad’s mental health." What does that look like? Delete that sentence and replace it with a description of the look on her face. Show her concern rather than telling it to us.