There are some few problems in the translation - I know that must be a tough task. Anyway:
EXT. A COUNTRY ROAD – DAYTIME
By the side of the road, there is a pack of homeless dogs
basking in the sun. A truck is driving by, the dogs jump up,
start barking.
Not very efficient writing and in an active voice by getting rid of the ing words. Try something like:
EXT. A COUNTRY ROAD – DAYTIME
A pack of homeless DOGS bask in the sun.
A truck approaches. The dogs jump up, BARK.
Here:
Quoted Text Behind the truck there is a car going, a driver is trying to bypass the animal, but fails and is going to the oncoming lane, where a terrible accident takes place.
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You need a more details - what is the accident? And again, avoid the ing words. e.g.,
The driver tries to bypass the animal.
Is beter