Cartoon Hell by William David Glenn IV - Short, Comedy, Horror - Two horror buffs watch a classic cartoon which allegedly makes people go crazy, causing a bloody rampage in a suburban home. 7 pages

production: Four speaking roles. One location. Some Horror SFX. - pdf format

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Great gore, holy cow. You did not hold back. I would say add some more detail about the cartoon itself, with that little of description its hard to be disturbed or scared by it. You could also freshen up on some of the dialogue. But overall cool story.