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Posted by: Don, January 19th, 2020, 5:33pm
The World's Singing by Jezel Vega - Short, Horror - {no logline} 9 pages - pdf format
New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice :)
Posted by: Yuvraj, January 26th, 2020, 4:57am; Reply: 1
It is a nice one Vega.
But I think you should at least have given a logline. It is a must. Plus the action line in a script should be as short as possible, everything you convey should be via the dialogues.
Good luck.
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