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Posted by: Don, February 11th, 2020, 6:01pm

Growing Up by Tony Campbell - Short, Family - {no logline} 4 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: JohnMcCarthy, February 28th, 2020, 1:49pm; Reply: 1

Well, I'm sorry but I haven't the faintest clue what your story is about. Perhaps it would have been a good idea to have a log line to give the reader some idea going in. There are also quite a few formatting and grammatical errors. Needs a good deal of work.

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