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Posted by: Don, March 14th, 2020, 1:36pm
Efficiency Man by J. Bruno - Short, Comedy - A modern day man lives his life as efficiently as possible. A short dark satire that plays like a weird commercial for a super hero.  2 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: SAC, March 14th, 2020, 9:22pm; Reply: 1
Efficient script, but your font seems all over the place. Anyway, it's cute, make me chuckle in a few spots. Didn't hate it, but doesn't really make a whole lot of sense. Kinda like a bizzarro skit that maybe only you and a select few friends know about. That kind of thing.

Steve
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