Happiness by Rex F. Luciano - Short, Romance, Drama - Based on the novel "Sa Langit Papatak Ang Ulan". 7 pages - pdf format

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Hi Rex.

For starters.. I mean it all starts from a LOG LINE that will give us an idea / prelude of your story. Your reads; Based on the novel "Sa Langit Papatak Ang Ulan"

You assume we have read a novel we can not even pronounce.

Self reply here writing / giving it a LOG LINE.

Wait.. I thought I'd give it a read. Only to find the entire script is written in a foreign language.
It's a short, so maybe get a friend to translate write it in English - Maybe you have a good story for us to look at. All the best.