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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Comedy Scripts / The Roots of Evil

Posted by: Don, May 7th, 2020, 1:17pm

The Roots of Evil by Jason K. Allen - Short, Comedy, Horror - Young Zack is terribly excited about his birthday party -- that is, until his clueless family brings out the disappointing birthday cake. 2 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: eldave1, May 7th, 2020, 1:37pm; Reply: 1

Well written enough, Jason. I just didn't quite get the point of the story.

Posted by: Yuvraj, May 8th, 2020, 11:40am; Reply: 2

Quoted from eldave1
Well written enough, Jason. I just didn't quite get the point of the story.

Well I also thought the same.

Plus I'm also not sure why it is under the 'comedy script' board? Maybe it's just me, I didn't get the punch.

Posted by: BarryJohn, May 9th, 2020, 5:14am; Reply: 3

Yeah.. I didn't get it neither.

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