Lucky Goblin by Simon Parker - Short, Horror - A young school boy meets a magical goblin who's out out to kill, and human greed is his weapon. 6 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Nice story, Simon. Although a bit generic but still works wonders.

A little issue on my side is that there are way more dialogs than needed, they sound too evident. The actions can be more eloquent here.

Plus I don't think this should be under the 'horror script' board. This seems to tilt more towards the 'fantasy' genre to me.

Anyways nice little story.