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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board  /  My Work In Progress  /  The Killing Waters
Posted by: stevie, May 28th, 2020, 8:01pm
Finally, after a 10 month pregnancy, my new feature is birthed!

Will have to wait till after the new OWC to post but all good. Feel so damn relieved as this one has been a struggle.

The logline:  During the American Civil War, Confederate and Union soldiers must join forces to battle a killer shark.

Title is CONFLICT for now but I’m up for a cool alternative as its a tough one to name lol. Will be doing more reading on SS too as I’ve been a bit slack lately.  Cheers all and I’ll have a crack at the new OWC now my head is emptied of shark, gunboats and blue and gray uniforms lol
Posted by: LC, May 28th, 2020, 8:26pm; Reply: 1
Well done, matey!

But, is it one soldier as in 'a' or plural soldiers?

Wow, that logline is Intriguing to say the least.
Posted by: stevie, May 28th, 2020, 9:24pm; Reply: 2
Oh nice spot Lib cheers
Posted by: eldave1, May 29th, 2020, 2:51pm; Reply: 3
Very cool
Posted by: Kirsten, May 30th, 2020, 4:33am; Reply: 4
Well done Steve, I hear your excitement (I'm chugging away at my first feature as well). Hopefully I'll be able to give it a read!!

And by the way..is Paul dead? ;) ;) ;).
Posted by: stevie, May 30th, 2020, 5:12am; Reply: 5
Hey cheers Kirsten! Good luck with yours!

Hopefully Paul isn't dead or I paid good money to see an imposter in 2017 lol!!!


[bert's edit]  read the script: https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1592671581/
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