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Posted by: James A McCormick, May 29th, 2020, 12:30pm
The Janitor (only a working title)

Logline:
A shy, reclusive janitor is forced to rally the tenants and take charge when supernatural forces take over his tenement building.

Posted by: LC, June 13th, 2020, 12:19am; Reply: 1
This needs a bit more regarding supernatural forces, too vague.

Needs stakes too... Rally the tenants to do what, or else what will happen? Jmho.
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