Print Topic

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board  /  Script Review Exchange  /  Superman script. I know. I know. But hear me out.
Posted by: JohnPaul, June 10th, 2020, 1:13pm
:D1.  When I have writers block sometimes it helps me to write fan fiction

2. It helped me a lot to get back into the swing of things and now Iīm writing an original found footage script.

3. It would be really helpful to get some feedback on dialogue and descriptions, so I donīt make the same errors in the next script.

4. I want to see if it grabs the attention.

5. Since the new original script has a lot of action, I want to know that I am writing action in a way that people can follow.

6.  Of course I am willing to read your scripts in exchange and give you feedback.

7. And of course I want honesty. Uh, by the way I have a Wonder Woman script up as well. But this was from some years ago. I wrote it before Wonder Woman 2017 came out, but some feedback on that would be appreciated too.

Thanks for hearing me out lol  :K) :K)
Posted by: Zack, June 10th, 2020, 10:13pm; Reply: 1
Hey, John. Welcome to Simplyscripts. :) No need to be ashamed of writing fan-fiction.

I'll take a look at it for ya. Just have one stipulation, I won't force myself to read something that I'm not enjoying. Hope that sounds fair to you. I'll give it a peek and leave you some notes on the script thread.

Btw, here are some links that may help you out a bit:

https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-cc/m-1124159895/
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-knowyou/
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-screenwrite/
Posted by: LC, June 11th, 2020, 12:18am; Reply: 2
Hey Zack, thanks for posting the links for JohnPaul!

You must be psychic and guessed I was out of action this morning.  8) :D

Posted by: Zack, June 11th, 2020, 12:54am; Reply: 3

Quoted from LC
Hey Zack, thanks for posting the links for JohnPaul!

You must be psychic and guessed I was out of action this morning.  8) :D



Figured I'd help ya' out. :)
Posted by: JohnPaul, June 12th, 2020, 7:44am; Reply: 4
Hi. Thanks.

I was supposed to get an email message letting me know that I got a reply.

Sorry for the late response.
Posted by: JohnPaul, June 12th, 2020, 7:53am; Reply: 5
Posted by: JohnPaul, June 12th, 2020, 7:55am; Reply: 6
[quote=Zack_M._Akers]

Figured I'd help ya' out. :)  

Is there anything I can read of yours?

Posted by: JohnPaul, June 12th, 2020, 1:00pm; Reply: 7

Quoted from LC
Hey Zack, thanks for posting the links for JohnPaul!

You must be psychic and guessed I was out of action this morning.  8) :D


Link -Superman - https://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/SUPERMANYEARONEAMERICANALIEN.pdf

-   Wonder Woman -      https://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/WonderWomanDaughterOfDestiny.pdf


Can i read something of yours?
Print page generated: April 19th, 2021, 1:52am