Spider Love... Well sort of. by Barry John Terblanche - Short, Comedy - By nature the larger female spider will kill and eat the male after mating. Fred, is out to change things. He's calling it casual sex.   10 pages

CW: explicit violent sexual natures - pdf format

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CW: explicit violent sexual nature. - No... no... (That was a L.O.L insert)

Here we can have a good laugh at mother nature.. And cheer Fred for evolution.

ENJOY!  

Ok, Barry.  An interesting script.  I will admit I laughed when Clive says, "Yeah, I lost three legs, but I have 1,752 kids".  So Fred wants to change the way spiders have sex with the females.  Clive agrees with his new theory and he is the "bait", so to speak.  Let's just say Clive is gullible enough to experiment.  Does he succeed?  I am not going to ruin it for anyone.

This is a rather strong sexually driven story.  Very graphic in the details, but you are warned before reading it.  I will say there are some grammar issues that need to be fixed.  Before posting make sure you read what you are about to publish to everyone.  The more changes and corrections you make before submitting, the less you may have to deal with later.

Cute, adult script.  I could see this being filmed as an "Adult Animated" short.  This is definitely not your typical "Saturday Morning Cartoon".  

Thanks for the read Mike.

Clive was not the bait... He in fact did not agree with Fred's theory. Fred, wants to "get-some" but he is not willing to die for it - thus, his plan hereto.

PS: Cartoon network and Nickelodeon turned down this script --Wonder why?    ;D ;D ;D

Look out for part 2:
Sandy to forest slut.