Entitled by Russell Davis - Thriller - Three people wake up in a room with no doors or windows. They notice a casket at the far side of the room with three locks and a timer counting down. They must figure out why they are there and what happens when the timer reaches zero. 78 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hi Russell

Horror is not my cup of tea, but I had ten minutes to waste.. So I thought I'd read a few pagers. A few more... some more... Before I knew it, I'd reached THE END.

What a real page turner! You had me continually wanting to know what will happen next... A well written good story that asks a just question at the end.

NICE!

Hello writer. I dip in and out of this site so not sure if you’re a regular. But I read this. Well done for finishing a contained thriller with limited cast. It’s tough - I know! But we’ll worth dedicating time to getting it right. I think you have a set up and enough mystery to carry you along to the half way point. After that I think things need to link up more.

If you’re around and want feedback, I can add some more. But only if you want constructive criticism.

Hello Russell Davis. I would like to buy this script from you. I am friends with a director of independent films. We like the film and would like to make a low budget feature with a film group we have. Please email me at yoda.downing(at)gmail.com. I'd love to discuss things over the phone. Thank you.

Ethan, contact Don, to obtain contact details for the Writer
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Unfortunately there are none on the title page and he also didn't respond to feedback back in 2020.
P.S. I took out your personal details that could be Spammed.