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Posted by: Don, June 28th, 2020, 4:40pm
From Before by James Austin McCormick - Short, Horror - An ambitious university professor finds the things he’s done to come so far so quickly come back to haunt him, quite literally. 12 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: BarryJohn, June 29th, 2020, 3:46am; Reply: 1
Very well written. For all the action that was short and to the point - VISUAL

Nice page turner - story. The ending... Let's just say; Hell have no furry like a woman scorned.

Well done.    
Posted by: Yuvraj, June 29th, 2020, 4:22am; Reply: 2
Hi, James,

Nice story with clean writing.


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His attention rests on MICHAEL, a future academic if ever there was on.


I think it has to ONE not ON.

A little of a wobbly start but still worth the read.

Good luck.
Posted by: James A McCormick, December 29th, 2020, 5:45pm; Reply: 3
Update. This has now been made into a short film.
Posted by: Pleb, December 30th, 2020, 3:53am; Reply: 4
Congratulations James!

Post a link up for the finished film if you can. Always good to see the difference between the script and the film.
Posted by: James A McCormick, December 31st, 2020, 8:25am; Reply: 5
Will do, thanks
Posted by: eldave1, December 31st, 2020, 8:38pm; Reply: 6
Super!
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