I'm finally up on all my reads and thought I'd do a bulk thread for exchanges...(I tried to delete my other thread but it didn't delete the replies).

I'm happy to exchange reads for any of the scripts in my signature for equivalent length scripts.

Re: "All Good", this is something I'm wanting to adapt into a feature from the short so any feedback with that in mind would be great.

"Flotsam" and "Slow Motion" are features I'm sitting on new drafts for so any feedback would be valued.

My feedback to you would include: line notes in the margin of the script (using the PDF "comments" tool) plus a general summary of my thoughts with more actionable feedback, based on what you wanted to be the focus of the coverage.

Hit me up.

EDIT - in case you can't read my signature, these are the scripts I'm wanting feedback on:

"Flotsam" Horror, Drama, Feature


"Slow-Motion Car Crash" Romantic Comedy, Feature

"All Good" Drama, Short, Coming-of-age

Hey man, I'll give Flotsam a read sometime this week.

I'll have the 1st draft of a feature ready to go in a couple of weeks if you're still keen.

Sounds good! Send me a PM.

Hi AlsoBen,

You still interested in an exchange? I just posted a Thriller, "Strength of a Soul". Let me know.

Frank

Hi AlsoBen,

You still interested in an exchange? I just posted a Thriller, "Strength of a Soul". Let me know.

Frank

AlsoBen,

I would like to take a stab at "Slow Motion Crash" as an exchange.

Frank

Hi Frank

What scripts do you want read? Can you link? Happy for you to read any of the ones in my OP.

AlsoBen,

Like feedback on my Thriller "Strength of a Soul."

I'll get going with your "Slow Motion Car Crash" this week, have feedback posted by this weekend.

Frank

AlsoBen,

I guess you already located the script, but here's a link anyway.

https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-thriller/m-1602779291/

If you click on the link next to my scripts, it should take you there too.

Frank