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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Comedy Scripts / Madam Izabella
Posted by: Don, August 6th, 2020, 8:21am
Madam Izabella by Jason K. Allen - Short, Comedy - A man visits a psychic seeking knowledge about his love life and his favorite fishing hole. But it's Madam Izabella's first ever customer, and things don't go quite as planned. 10 pages - pdf format
For production consideration - No comments required
Posted by: BarryJohn, August 8th, 2020, 2:57am; Reply: 1
I fond the story hard to follow "grasp" at the end...
- Your log line says; A man visits a psychic seeking knowledge ~ So I'm with that he is a client. But, at the end he seems to be the owner / boss?
- Was he interviewing Madam Izabella - was she that good to "change" Tommy too...
Also... I found the story to be "corny" in:
- fishing out fried chicken
- Batman fishing
- Your tiny pee pee
- CAULDRON... spiting, earwax, gigantic bellybutton lint... To then drink it! Auuugh...
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