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SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Review My Logline / New Loglines for My First 2 Scripts
Posted by: Hank (Guest), August 16th, 2020, 6:54am
Hi, these updated loglines are for the first feature script I wrote and its prequel/sequel. I recently started 2nd drafts for these scripts. Please let me know what you think of the loglines. Would you watch these movies?
1) Space Fish & the Homeless Crusader - A one-armed young man discusses traveling the universe with his girlfriend moments before she dies, and eager to honour her he robs banks to afford a replacement limb.
2) Craterpeople - A young patriot soldiers a war fought using laser-based weaponry and is later recruited for leading a double life, to seduce and spy on a foreign ex-politician.
Posted by: Yuvraj, August 16th, 2020, 7:30am; Reply: 1
I liked the second one. I am not a fan of the 'universey' kind of movies so the second one sounded more realistic to me.
Posted by: Hank (Guest), August 16th, 2020, 7:46am; Reply: 2
Thanks! They both take place on a dystopian Earth until the very end of each script. I consider them Earth Operas, as opposed to Space Operas, because they’re both epic and tragic.
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