Sudesh, there are tons of things wrong with this. About every error imaginable. Too many to mention in a single post.
So, let's start with three things - not putting your action/descriptions in parentheticals.
Not writing unfilmables. Everything you write - we must be able to hear or see on the screen. We can't see that she late for work - only that she wakes up in a panic. We can't see that Ryan is her co -worker - only that she is texting.
Texting is not dialogue - don't format it that way
E,g this:
Quoted Text INT. SARAH'S ROOM - MORNING
SARAH wakes up abruptly to the surprise that she is late for work.
SARAH (Sarah awakes suddenly. Eyes wide open as if she heard a loud bang. In a state of panic she reaches for her phone to notice that it is 10:00am and she is late for work. She frantically texts her coworker Ryan.) Hey Ryan. Sorry I'm going to be late. I'll be there sexy. (After sending the text she frantically gets ready for work.)
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INT. SARAH'S ROOM - MORNING
SARAH awakes suddenly. Eyes wide open as if she heard a loud bang.
In a state of panic she reaches for her phone to notice that it is 10:00 am.
She taps in a text.
INSERT TEXT:
Hey Ryan. Sorry I'm going to be late.
I'll be there sexy.Sarah hits send, then rushes towards the closet, yanks some clothes off the hanger.
Even the above has problems - but it fixes the three I mentioned. GO through your entire script and fix these throughout - repost a new draft and we can move on the the rest of the script.
Also - read some scripts - it will help you