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Posted by: Don, September 7th, 2020, 12:31pm
The Champion by Babak Forozandeh - Short, Drama - A 20 years old become the champion of the world and his life changes dramatically. 21 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: AndyJ, September 30th, 2020, 12:05pm; Reply: 1
I opened it but didn't read it. I was put off by the camera directions and as I scrolled to see how many times you used them I noticed all the blocks of dialogue all in caps. The formatting was slightly off as well.
Posted by: eldave1, September 30th, 2020, 1:23pm; Reply: 2
Yep - this isn't even close to being in the correct format.
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