SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / Short Horror / A Night in the Madhouse
Posted by: Don, September 13th, 2020, 12:25pm
A Night in the Madhouse by Steven Sallie - Short, Horror - A pair of Youtube vloggers spend the night in an allegedly haunted sanitarium. 18 pages - pdf format
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Posted by: BarryJohn, September 14th, 2020, 1:28am; Reply: 1
Steven. Wow... real creepy story. Nice at it ~ well written, for all the dialog that was natural.
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Max jerks the from away from his ear.
Think you meant: Max jerks the phone away from his ear.
This story / script will make for a good creepy movie!