Hey everyone, does anyone want to swap again? I have this script and I edited the spelling and added in the missing scene after it was posted on here and sent it of to channel 4 screenwriting challenge, does anyone know how hard it is to get into that?

Anyway here’s my second script I believe it’s much better than the last one although in a different genre I think I found my voice more and improved on what you all taught me, could anyone review it or swap a script I’m ready to swap again?
Thanks
https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-drama/m-1599834338/