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Posted by: Hank (Guest), September 26th, 2020, 11:59pm
My friend gave me this script idea.

Buff Jesus (war)
Jesus Christ finally returns to Earth on a mission to send the most evil to Hell and he recruits millions of people to fight for change.
Posted by: LC, September 27th, 2020, 12:22am; Reply: 1
Hmm, Hank, do you not think your friend might have mistaken the character of Jesus?

Buff Jesus?
Posted by: AlsoBen, September 27th, 2020, 12:55am; Reply: 2
The historical Jesus was already fairly buff, which begs the question: just how buff is buff Jesus? Is this implication being that he returns to earth and starts working out, or that he was extremely buff and we just didn't know? Lots of questions that I hope your script answers.
Posted by: Hank (Guest), September 27th, 2020, 3:02am; Reply: 3
No, I don't think she does. Yes, Buff Jesus.

Most film depictions of Jesus he is lean. He works out in Heaven before returning to our plane.
Posted by: Hank (Guest), September 27th, 2020, 7:39am; Reply: 4
The most evil is the government by the way. Many die in the revolution it's worth it in the end.
Posted by: eldave1, September 27th, 2020, 10:36am; Reply: 5
Sorry - Doesn't do anything for me.

I'm, admittedly an atheist, but still have a hard time grasping why the earth's salvation is dependent on the physical fitness of Jesus rather than - you know - the omnipotent God and Savior thing.
Posted by: AlsoBen, September 28th, 2020, 7:25pm; Reply: 6
In all seriousness, your logline lacks specificity. What is the change he is fighting for? Who and why is the most evil? Who is your protagonist - is it Buff Jesus? What incites his return to Earth all of a sudden (after 2000~ years of remaining dead?)
Posted by: HyperMatt, September 30th, 2020, 3:30pm; Reply: 7
If I had a dollar for every pseudo-Jesus/ Satan script I have heard of...
I'd probably be as rich as Mr. Bezos.
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