Exorcised by Divyansh - Short, Comedy - A priest tries to successfully exorcise a young woman, who doesn't want to let her demon go. 8 pages - pdf format

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Divyansh,

Welcome to SS.

Your logline should be...
A novice priest tries to successfully exorcise a young woman who doesn't want to let her demon go.

Your title page should have your name and your contact email.

Type FADE IN before starting the script.

Example;
FADE IN
INT. BEDROOM - DAY

Now,

You have a very good story here. This is a new take on a demon. I liked it.

There are plenty of repetitive things that you can trim and cut down this script to 6 pages. It will be a much better script then.

Good luck with this.