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Posted by: Don, January 3rd, 2021, 12:08pm
Retaliation by Otomewo Simon - Action, Adventure - Singh comes to USA with the aim of becoming president and burn down America, but his plans gets twisted after his group stopped working with him, he came up with a plan of eliminating all of them after he escaped prison, but in the long run his plans were altered once again. 151 pages - pdf format
New writer interested in feedback on this work, please be nice :)
Posted by: MatthewG, January 3rd, 2021, 2:43pm; Reply: 1
you gotta work on that logline bro
Posted by: LC, January 3rd, 2021, 5:21pm; Reply: 2
Posted by: AlsoBen, January 15th, 2021, 10:03pm; Reply: 3
Agree that the logline isn't standard, but I opened the script and skimmed a few pages and it seems to be formatted well and industry standard.
Otomewo, if you can make it known that you're on the board and reading these, I'll give this a read for you.
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