Script Swap - 90 page drama feature

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Posted by: RobertSpence, February 8th, 2021, 10:00pm

Hi all

I've just completed the first draft of a feature I've written (around 90 pages) and am looking to have some people look at it to help with my redraft. I'm willing to read scripts in return so get in touch if you'd like to do a swap.

It's a drama and revolves around young offenders, gangs etc.

Thanks

Robert

Posted by: mrtallent@yahoo.com, February 27th, 2022, 10:15pm; Reply: 1

It moves quickly,simply. I would say it's good fare to develop the characters more and the story can move along with some twist, more of them.

Also, what kind of personalities do these guys have? Are you going to develop them into some more dynamism?

Posted by: FrankH, March 20th, 2022, 12:54pm; Reply: 2

Hey Robert,

I'm interested in a swap.
Message or e-mail me.

Frank

Posted by: JFrench, November 18th, 2022, 10:00am; Reply: 3

Robert,

Happy to review and swap.

How do I see yours?

Cheers

Jason

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