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Posted by: Don, February 21st, 2021, 10:49am
Handicap Stall by Xavier Gonzalez - Short, Comedy - A perfectly capable guy decides to use the handicap stall, he soon regrets it. 2 pages - pdf format
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Posted by: AlexanderLR, February 21st, 2021, 12:26pm; Reply: 1
Nice little comedy sketch, reminded me of Larry David from Curb Your Enthusiasm - he steps out of a disabled toilet and is confronted by a man in a wheelchair etc. It's quite funny. The payoff made me laugh so well done. By the way i'm new to Simplyscripts and have recently uploaded my first story 'Fur and no Whiskers' feel free to check it out if you'd like.
Posted by: Xavier, February 21st, 2021, 10:16pm; Reply: 2
Hey, thank you Alexander. I’ve not seen much of Curb Your Enthusiasm but that does sound funny. This one was inspired by a story my buddy told me he went through some years back.
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