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Posted by: Don, April 10th, 2021, 9:07am
Giant Monsters Attack the Westcoast! by Robbie Young - Short, Comedy - When two giant rubber monsters begin wrecking havoc, the fate of the world rests on the back of a 13 y/o boy and his giant cardboard robot. 4 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: Matthew Taylor, April 15th, 2021, 9:57am; Reply: 1
With a title like that, I gotta read it. It's a common error but the saying is to wreak havoc, not wreck havoc.

Anyway, looks like you had some fun writing that - I doubt it's a story that will be made but you got some writing chops and an unorthodox style, and frankly I was all for it.

Best of luck to ya
Posted by: Zack, April 15th, 2021, 10:18am; Reply: 2
Hey, Robbie. You around?

Like Matthew, I too thought this was a creative and fun little script.

Hope to see more work from you. :)
Posted by: BarryJohn, April 15th, 2021, 1:09pm; Reply: 3
Robbie. That was a really great entertaining short that was well written. Cool!
Posted by: Warren, April 15th, 2021, 6:37pm; Reply: 4
Agree with the above, super fun short that gave me quite a few chuckles.

Needs a really good edit but this was great.
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