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Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 7:54am
Welcome to Challenge 2 of the May Trifecta Challenge aka the Mini Writers' Tournament.

Please read the rules carefully.

(Don's rule)
Participants must read and comment/review in the discussion board at least 10 other scripts submitted or your work will be removed (no harm, no foul.) I understand that life gets in the way.

You have 72 hours to write a 1-4 page properly formatted script.

Your script must incorporate one of the following sets of genre, location, object -

Genre: Horror /Crime
Location: Train station
Object: Human body part

Genre: SciFi /Thriller
Location: Body of water
Object: Item of advanced or electronic technology

Genre: Comedy /Romantic Comedy
Location: Public Bathroom
Object: Urn of ashes

*NO mixing and matching of genres, items, locations.

Clarification re GENRE selection:

You can use either genre in the same set separately e.g. Horror or Crime.

Or, you can elect to write a genre blend.

You cannot however, combine for example, RomanticComedy with Horror, or SciFi with Comedy etc.



Budget: Preferably Low. Minimal characters. Aim for easy and cheap to produce with minimal SFX.

No Nos:
No writing pairs - sole writers only.
No pisstakes.

Submit your entry here:
https://www.simplyscripts.com/unpro_short_exercise.html

Do not put your real name(s) on your script; this is an anonymous challenge. However, please use your real name(s) when submitting your script.

After the challenge closes you can either have your script removed or resubmit your script with your name on it.

Participants must read and comment/review in the discussion board at least 10 other scripts submitted or your work will be removed (no harm, no foul. I understand that live gets in the way.

Please put ©2021 on your title page.



One entry per person.
No multiple entries


Time will be given to read and review scripts ( probably 48 hrs,) and then -

- The announcement of the third and final challenge will follow soon afterwards.

-  There will likely be some breathing space before the third and final challenge is announced.

All three challenges will be of varying page lengths but they will all be short page counts to enable ease of reading/reviewing.

Stay tuned for ongoing announcements and to keep up with deadlines.

The deadline/countdown clock will be posted at the start of each challenge.

Happy pondering before Don puts the clock up.

Any questions, ask away!

Additional important information:

The LOCATION needs to be featured as the pivotal and major location of your script.

This is mainly to do with keeping your budget minimal.

That said, you could for example have a brief scene driving or walking to the location.

I'm going to borrow partly from James' prev Quickie challenge, re the requirements of the Object:

OBJECT REQUIREMENTS FURTHER EXPLAINED:

For the object, have it be visible... in the screenplay. It cannot be a character describing the object. It cannot be a painting of the object. It cannot be a hologram. It has to be the actual object we can see on screen.

LOCATION clarification below:

Definition of Body of Water :
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Body_of_water

Outside location.
Fish ponds and spa baths not advisable.

Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 14th, 2021, 8:09am; Reply: 1
Oooh, interesting! One question, does it have to be 4 pages exact, or 4 pages or less?
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 8:12am; Reply: 2
1-4 pages is fine, Mark.

Assumed everyone would want the full count. :)
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 14th, 2021, 8:15am; Reply: 3

Quoted from LC
1-4 pages is fine, Mark.

Assumed everyone would want the full count. :)


I'm going for a one-sentence script this time!
Posted by: SAC, May 14th, 2021, 8:38am; Reply: 4
Ooh. Motivation strikes early. I’m bangin one out right now. A script, that is.
Posted by: JEStaats, May 14th, 2021, 8:40am; Reply: 5
Damn, can I just rewrite Mind the Gap and toss in a foot? :)

So, 72 hours from 0600 AZ time...Monday morning for me.
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 8:47am; Reply: 6
You guys.  ;D

Ha! I tossed up changing that location because of your prev entry, John (mind-reader) but thought nah, I'll leave it cause it's a nifty location.

P.S. The time starts when Don puts the clock up, I imagine. Like it did last time.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, May 14th, 2021, 9:02am; Reply: 7
Decisions, decisions, decisions...
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 9:11am; Reply: 8
I'll just add a couple of clarifications myself, cause I won't be up too much longer.

'Item of advanced or electronic technology' can be now obsolete, or anything existing e.g. drones, lasers,, robots, the humble cell phone - anything really, but it can also be something of your own creation e.g. fictional or futuristic :

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fictional_technology

I think 'body of water' is self explanatory - it can be anything from an ocean to a dam, a lake, or even a swimming pool. Might draw the line at a puddle or kitchen sink.

Urn of Ashes - self explanatory.
Of course those ashes don't necessarily have to be human. And probably not of the cricket trophy variety.
Posted by: FrankM, May 14th, 2021, 9:14am; Reply: 9
Nice. Very interesting challenge, and should ensure some variety in the scripts, too.

Now to set a story in the public restroom of a train station by the river.
Posted by: MarkItZero, May 14th, 2021, 9:15am; Reply: 10
Nice variety. So many choices, can't decide...

Does the whole script have to take place at the location or just any part of it?
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 9:19am; Reply: 11

Quoted from FrankM
Nice. Very interesting challenge, and should ensure some variety in the scripts, too. Now to set a story in the public restroom of a train station by the river.

And all in a one sentence script like Mark suggested.  ;D



Posted by: JEStaats, May 14th, 2021, 9:19am; Reply: 12

Quoted from LC

I think 'body of water' is self explanatory - it can be anything from an ocean to a dam, a lake, or even a swimming pool. Might draw the line at a puddle or kitchen sink.


I was thinking a literal body of water (e.g., the Abyss) at first but that would kind of blow the budget out of the water. Pun intended.
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 9:44am; Reply: 13

Quoted from MarkItZero
Does the whole script have to take place at the location or just any part of it?


The location needs to be featured as the pivotal and major location of your script.

This is mainly to do with keeping your budget minimal.

That said, you could for example have a brief scene driving or walking to the location.

I'm going to borrow partly from your prev Quickie challenge, James,  re the requirements of the Object:

OBJECT REQUIREMENTS FURTHER EXPLAINED:

For the object, have it be visible... in the screenplay. It cannot be a character describing the object. It cannot be a painting of the object. It cannot be a hologram. It has to be the actual object we can see it on screen.[/i]

Thanks, James.  ;)

Does that clear that part up?
Posted by: FrankM, May 14th, 2021, 9:53am; Reply: 14
But a hologram is an item of technology :D
Posted by: ReneC, May 14th, 2021, 9:54am; Reply: 15

Quoted from FrankM
But a hologram is an item of technology :D


There's one in every bunch.  ::)
Posted by: MarkItZero, May 14th, 2021, 9:56am; Reply: 16

Quoted from LC
Does that clear that part up?


Crystal clear, thanks.
Posted by: ReneC, May 14th, 2021, 9:57am; Reply: 17
Technically, even a stone knife is an item of technology. Any tool is technology.

Maybe it should be advanced technology? Or at least electronic? Or is the sky really the limit?
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 10:02am; Reply: 18

Quoted from FrankM
But a hologram is an item of technology :D

Ha!  ;D That'll teach me to watch what I quote.  Okay, smartie-pants, if you were to select that specific object in your SciFi script,, a hologram would be allowed, but only if it features prominently. It cannot be just referred to etc.
Posted by: ReneC, May 14th, 2021, 10:06am; Reply: 19

Quoted from LC

Ha!  ;D That'll teach me to watch what I quote.  Okay, smartie-pants, if you were to select that specific object in your SciFi script,, a hologram would be allowed, but only if it features prominently. It cannot be just referred to etc.


"Obi-wan Kenobi, you're my only hope."
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 10:09am; Reply: 20

Quoted from ReneC
Technically, even a stone knife is an item of technology. Any tool is technology.
Maybe it should be advanced technology? Or at least electronic? Or is the sky really the limit?

Done. Thanks, Rene.  ;)
Will edit on the main page requirement to 'item of advanced or electronic technology'.

Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 10:16am; Reply: 21
I think most questions are covered? I hope so...

Hitting the hay in a few mins. After 1am here.

Save any more for later.  :)
Posted by: SAC, May 14th, 2021, 10:28am; Reply: 22
Is it too early to say I have a first draft done?
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 10:30am; Reply: 23

Quoted from SAC
Is it too early to say I have a first draft done?

;D
Posted by: mmmarnie, May 14th, 2021, 10:44am; Reply: 24
Nice. I have off today! Have to work Sat, Sun, Mon so I'd better hurry and get inspired!! Good thing I'm stuck home with no freakin gas in my car...and no gas anywhere around. LOL
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 14th, 2021, 11:33am; Reply: 25

Quoted from SAC
Is it too early to say I have a first draft done?


They say you should never, ever go with your first ideas, but Steve has the first draft done before they can finish that sentence.

Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 14th, 2021, 12:02pm; Reply: 26
Oh man this is tough - I'm guessing no one is going to be doing a Pursuer chase where the talbes turn so I might do another one just to be unique.

Man chases Woman around a pond but she is actually holding a shrinking ray, zaps him and kicks him into the pond where he is eaten by a prize-winning Koi.... that's my idea so if you could all refrain from doing anything similar that would be great :-)
Posted by: JEStaats, May 14th, 2021, 12:03pm; Reply: 27
There goes THAT idea down the tubes.
Posted by: SAC, May 14th, 2021, 12:52pm; Reply: 28

Quoted from MarkRenshaw


They say you should never, ever go with your first ideas, but Steve has the first draft done before they can finish that sentence.



Right. I’m like — hold my Diet Coke, mother f’er.
Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 4:50pm; Reply: 29
Stupid question time...

I get the object and the location, but for the genre selections is it either or for the two, so horror or crime or does it need to be both, so a crime horror?
Posted by: Zack, May 14th, 2021, 5:30pm; Reply: 30

Quoted from Warren
Stupid question time...

I get the object and the location, but for the genre selections is it either or for the two, so horror or crime or does it need to be both, so a crime horror?


Good question. I was thinking the same thing.
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 14th, 2021, 5:42pm; Reply: 31

Quoted from Warren
Stupid question time...

I get the object and the location, but for the genre selections is it either or for the two, so horror or crime or does it need to be both, so a crime horror?


That is a good question.
I assumed it was pick one (as there is no point combining comedy with Romcom as you know, there's already comedy in romcom)
So if it is combined, I gotta start again lol
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 5:46pm; Reply: 32
Warren and Zack, I was originally giving you the option of choosing either genre, but if you think you blend both, go for it!

And what Matt said. Also, Matt, you don't have to start again.

I'll qualify on the main page - you can use either genre of the same set -

You can elect to write a blend of Crime Horror or a Horror on its own, or a Crime on its own.

You cannot however, combine for example, RomanticComedy with Horror, or SciFi with Comedy etc.

Does this clear this up?


Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 6:01pm; Reply: 33

Quoted from Matthew Taylor


That is a good question.
I assumed it was pick one (as there is no point combining comedy with Romcom as you know, there's already comedy in romcom)
So if it is combined, I gotta start again lol


Yeah this...

"One of the following sets of genre" as opposed to one of the genres

And the fact they rom com already has com is what was confusing me.

Thanks, Libby, much happier with one genre.
Posted by: ReneC, May 14th, 2021, 6:14pm; Reply: 34

Quoted from Warren


Yeah this...

"One of the following sets of genre" as opposed to one of the genres

And the fact they rom com already has com is what was confusing me.

Thanks, Libby, much happier with one genre.


Wait...so no sci-fi horror???

Sorry, C'thulu, maybe the next one will be cosmic horror.
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 6:40pm; Reply: 35

Quoted from ReneC


Wait...so no sci-fi horror???

Sorry, C'thulu, maybe the next one will be cosmic horror.

;D Do the best you can with the genre allocations in the different sets.

We all know this lot can be mighty specific about whether something follows the brief.

Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 6:51pm; Reply: 36
I'm drawing an absolute blank on this one...

You've stumped me, Libby.
Posted by: Zack, May 14th, 2021, 6:53pm; Reply: 37
Something has come to me.  It is NOT nice.

Round 1 was just me warming up. ;D;D;D
Posted by: SAC, May 14th, 2021, 6:57pm; Reply: 38

Quoted from Zack
Something has come to me.  It is NOT nice.

Round 1 was just a warm-up for me. ;D;D;D


Speaking of not nice, sorry I trashed your naked guy pedo script. If I’d have known it was you, Id’ve been cool with that!  ;D
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 6:59pm; Reply: 39

Quoted from Warren
I'm drawing an absolute blank on this one...
You've stumped me, Libby.

Warren, something will come to you, I'm sure.
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 7:04pm; Reply: 40
For those of you who are sticklers for the rules, I've made a couple of clarifications on the challenge announcement page, (in blue) and am going to add another re a specific LOCATION.

I want to at least have everyone on the same page, so to speak. :)

Any other questions, fire away.
As we like to say, there are no stupid questions.
Posted by: Zack, May 14th, 2021, 7:05pm; Reply: 41

Quoted from SAC


Speaking of not nice, sorry I trashed your naked guy pedo script. If I�d have known it was you, Id�ve been cool with that!  ;D


Lol. It's all good, man! I appreciate the honesty. :) Love that you give me a pass though! I'll take it. ;D
Posted by: eldave1, May 14th, 2021, 7:06pm; Reply: 42

Quoted from Matthew Taylor
Oh man this is tough - I'm guessing no one is going to be doing a Pursuer chase where the talbes turn so I might do another one just to be unique.

Man chases Woman around a pond but she is actually holding a shrinking ray, zaps him and kicks him into the pond where he is eaten by a prize-winning Koi.... that's my idea so if you could all refrain from doing anything similar that would be great :-)


Titled:

DON'T BE KOI WITH ME
Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 7:08pm; Reply: 43
And like that I have a seed of an idea, not sure it will work on the page but it's all I've got to work with so far.
Posted by: eldave1, May 14th, 2021, 7:09pm; Reply: 44

Quoted from LC

As we like to say, there are no stupid questions.


I'll pick up that gauntlet:

Can I have someone else write mine?

Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 7:10pm; Reply: 45

Quoted from eldave1


Titled:

DON'T BE KOI WITH ME


  ;D
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 7:15pm; Reply: 46

Quoted from eldave1

Titled:

DON'T BE KOI WITH ME


Haha! Classic Dave.

Now speaking of ponds - the definition of a certain LOCATION - Body of Water is here:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Body_of_water

If you choose to write your location as an outdoor Spabath, or Koi pond,  your entry may well be laughed at.

Do people have any other questions re the Urn of ashes, or what defines a public bathroom etc?

Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 7:31pm; Reply: 47

Quoted from eldave1
I'll pick up that gauntlet:
Can I have someone else write mine?

Ha! I think you'll manage just fine on your own, Dave.  :D

Posted by: eldave1, May 14th, 2021, 7:42pm; Reply: 48
Okay - how long before we have a debate on whether or not something taking place on a train qualifies as a train station?
Posted by: ReneC, May 14th, 2021, 7:49pm; Reply: 49

Quoted from eldave1
Okay - how long before we have a debate on whether or not something taking place on a train qualifies as a train station?


Make it stop at a station?
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 7:57pm; Reply: 50
I really think we can be flexible on this.

On the train is find with me.
Plus...

Subway
Underground
Tunnel
Tube
Terminal

I'd even accept abandoned railway, or train compartment.
As long as everyone's in agreement with the general location vicinity I'm fine with it.

Set it in a Café at the train station would be pushing it.
Posted by: eldave1, May 14th, 2021, 8:00pm; Reply: 51

Quoted from LC
I really think we can be flexible on this.

Subway
Underground
Tunnel
Tube
Terminal

I'd even accept abandoned railway, or train compartment.
As long as everyone's in agreement with the general location vicinity I'm fine with it.

Set it in a Café at the train station would be pushing it.


So - it can be on a moving train as opposed to a train station?
Posted by: Zack, May 14th, 2021, 8:00pm; Reply: 52

Quoted from LC
I really think we can be flexible on this.

Subway
Underground
Tunnel
Tube
Terminal

I'd even accept abandoned railway, or train compartment.
As long as everyone's in agreement with the general location vicinity I'm fine with it.

Set it in a Café at the train station would be pushing it.


Pretty open. I like it. :)
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 8:16pm; Reply: 53

Quoted from eldave1

So - it can be on a moving train as opposed to a train station?

Hmm, I think filming on a moving train might be more difficult in terms of budget and logistics. Location better be static.
You could have a moving train fly past the actual station. And you can set it on a stationary train compartment, or in a tunnel at the station.

Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 9:37pm; Reply: 54
Hoping for a lot more variety this time, surely that will be the case with the mix of inclusions we've been given.
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 9:38pm; Reply: 55

Quoted from mmmarnie
Nice. I have off today! Have to work Sat, Sun, Mon so I'd better hurry and get inspired!! Good thing I'm stuck home with no freakin gas in my car...and no gas anywhere around. LOL

I hope you get inspired and get one past the line, Marnie!
I hope your gas shortage resolves itself too.  :D
Posted by: LC, May 14th, 2021, 9:41pm; Reply: 56

Quoted from Warren
Hoping for a lot more variety this time, surely that will be the case with the mix of inclusions we've been given.

Lots of women being pursued by runaway trains maybe?

P.S. We read them all together. A lot of them, even the same types could be easily filmed.
I hope some of those 2 pagers get picked up.

Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 9:48pm; Reply: 57

Quoted from LC

Lots of women being pursued by runaway trains maybe?

P.S. We read them all together. A lot of them, even the same types could be easily filmed.
I hope some of those 2 pagers get picked up.



For sure, many of the scripts would be a beginner/student filmmaker's ideal project.
Posted by: Warren, May 14th, 2021, 10:29pm; Reply: 58
Okay, back to square one. I've got Jack shit.
Posted by: ReneC, May 14th, 2021, 11:04pm; Reply: 59
I have...something.
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 12:16am; Reply: 60
Goddamn this script is bad. I don't really have much time to do anything else with it so it will have to do.
Posted by: LC, May 15th, 2021, 12:20am; Reply: 61
Hmm Warren, often your 'bad' is someone else's pretty darned good, so we'll be the judge of that.

Or, you'll go back to square 1 again.  ;)
Posted by: spesh2k, May 15th, 2021, 12:47am; Reply: 62
I've seen a lot on the MTA here in NYC after midnight, might not even have to make anything up. Awesome! And the trains here suck so bad late night after bartending, this will give me a chance to vent!!
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 1:23am; Reply: 63

Quoted from LC
Hmm Warren, often your 'bad' is someone else's pretty darned good, so we'll be the judge of that.

Or, you'll go back to square 1 again.  ;)


No time to go back to square 1 unfortunately, but I have a finished, edited script that I'm sure will be universally loved  ;D

That last bit is fake news.

Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 15th, 2021, 2:13am; Reply: 64
I have an idea. Just need to flesh out the beginning, middle, end and then come up with a better idea.
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 2:20am; Reply: 65

Quoted from MarkRenshaw
I have an idea. Just need to flesh out the beginning, middle, end and then come up with a better idea.


A very solid plan.
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 15th, 2021, 5:09am; Reply: 66

Quoted from eldave1


Titled:

DON'T BE KOI WITH ME


Nailed it!

I have my idea, I've written most of it. I'm probably bending the rules too much and will get marked down but it's a script I want to write and one I will be keeping post challenge.
Posted by: LC, May 15th, 2021, 5:39am; Reply: 67
Them's fighting words. Well, no, not really, but...

I hope it's set in a public bathroom, Matt.

Nope. Don't tell me!

I really hope one of the guys or gal with comedic flair will give that one a go.  ;D
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 15th, 2021, 6:03am; Reply: 68
I've written two pages and now it's like, how do I fit my idea in? Time for a bit of a rethink.
Posted by: mmmarnie, May 15th, 2021, 10:00am; Reply: 69
Omg. Had a small window to write something before I had to work 3 hard shifts, and I got nothing. It's the objects. Just couldn't come up with an idea that didn't sound ridiculous. Well...off to work.
Posted by: Zack, May 15th, 2021, 10:41am; Reply: 70

Quoted from mmmarnie
Omg. Had a small window to write something before I had to work 3 hard shifts, and I got nothing. It's the objects. Just couldn't come up with an idea that didn't sound ridiculous. Well...off to work.


I'm not falling for it, Marnie! I just know you wrote an absolute banger!  ;D
Posted by: FrankM, May 15th, 2021, 12:35pm; Reply: 71

Quoted from mmmarnie
Omg. Had a small window to write something before I had to work 3 hard shifts, and I got nothing. It's the objects. Just couldn't come up with an idea that didn't sound ridiculous. Well...off to work.


If it’s ridiculous then just use the comedy option.

Or it’s all a head-fake because you don’t want us to guess who wrote the festival-winner.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, May 15th, 2021, 12:36pm; Reply: 72
I have nothing... and neither of my spares from round 1 fit so I can't even upcycle ;-(

Consulted my ideas database, out of 600 I have one that might kinda-sorta-maybe fit if I squint... may have to do if the muse doesn't strike in the next 24 hours!

Posted by: MarkItZero, May 15th, 2021, 2:11pm; Reply: 73
Ugh. Had to work and now got relatives to deal with this weekend. Don't think I'm gonna pull this idea off in time... but if not I got a super easy back up I can finish no problem.
Posted by: ReneC, May 15th, 2021, 3:27pm; Reply: 74
It's almost done, but now I'm worried it's boring. I hope I can fix that.
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 4:30pm; Reply: 75

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
I have nothing... and neither of my spares from round 1 fit so I can't even upcycle ;-(

Consulted my ideas database, out of 600 I have one that might kinda-sorta-maybe fit if I squint... may have to do if the muse doesn't strike in the next 24 hours!



600!!! Wow, Anthony that's impressive. I maybe have 2 or 3 floating around my head at any time but nothing written down anywhere.
Posted by: FrankM, May 15th, 2021, 4:48pm; Reply: 76

Quoted from Warren


600!!! Wow, Anthony that's impressive. I maybe have 2 or 3 floating around my head at any time but nothing written down anywhere.


I’m in the same boat, once I was able to use characters I was working on for something else, and even then the story to fit the parameters was made up whole cloth.
Posted by: eldave1, May 15th, 2021, 4:48pm; Reply: 77
Okay - I am in and submitted.

I had this great idea about a laser beam coming out of a cell phone at sea. People are going to love it. I'm totally sure.
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 4:52pm; Reply: 78

Quoted from eldave1
Okay - I am in and submitted.

I had this great idea about a laser beam coming out of a cell phone at sea. People are going to love it. I'm totally sure.


Sounds like a hit to me  ;D
Posted by: ReneC, May 15th, 2021, 5:14pm; Reply: 79
Sometimes you just need to write what's in your head. That's my excuse for this round.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, May 15th, 2021, 5:27pm; Reply: 80
Warren, I just scribble down stuff, so some are just snippets... some are more formed.

Recently being watching a series called Europe from Above and the US equivalent, a ton of ideas have been sparked from there...

Hasn't helped this time but I've started writing something!
Posted by: Zack, May 15th, 2021, 5:36pm; Reply: 81

Quoted from ReneC
Sometimes you just need to write what's in your head. That's my excuse for this round.


That's always my excuse. Look where that's got me!  ;D
Posted by: LC, May 15th, 2021, 6:09pm; Reply: 82
I thought I made up the sets so they weren't too whacky.

It's not like it's a Place of Worship and Dice.

600 ideas, Ant?
Your head must be exploding.. :o
Made me think. I need me a Data Base.

Anyway, heaps of time left.
Marnie, you can scribble one up on your break.  ;D
Posted by: ReneC, May 15th, 2021, 6:16pm; Reply: 83

Quoted from AnthonyCawood
Warren, I just scribble down stuff, so some are just snippets... some are more formed.

Recently being watching a series called Europe from Above and the US equivalent, a ton of ideas have been sparked from there...

Hasn't helped this time but I've started writing something!


I have a google docs called The Well of Ideas where all my possible ideas goes. It's 22 pages of stuff, sometimes just a line or even just a title, some with a bit of detail attached, and some fleshed out a little more as the start of something. Mostly garbage, but whenever I need something new to write I start there and see what excites me.

I have another document that's just loglines for title prompts. That has some real gems in it too, and already over 6 pages. All together, probably around 300 ideas. Still a ways to go to 600, that's a lot.
Posted by: LC, May 15th, 2021, 6:20pm; Reply: 84
Wow! You guys are so organised.
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 15th, 2021, 6:23pm; Reply: 85
I'm writing mine in 4D so it spits ashes/water at you as you are reading the script.
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 6:34pm; Reply: 86

Quoted from LC
I thought I made up the sets so they weren't too whacky.

It's not like it's a Place of Worship and Dice.

600 ideas, Ant?
Your head must be exploding.. :o
Made me think. I need me a Data Base.

Anyway, heaps of time left.
Marnie, you can scribble one up on your break.  ;D


Hey I had my whacky Place of Worship and dice script produced from that QC :)

And Gary had his jump rope, old age home one produced from the same QC.

I thought you're combos were pretty good, and open until I tried to formulate an idea. I found the round really challenging.
Posted by: Zack, May 15th, 2021, 6:34pm; Reply: 87
I've got one idea. One HORRIBLE idea. Can't wait to share it. :)
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 6:35pm; Reply: 88

Quoted from MarkRenshaw
I'm writing mine in 4D so it spits ashes/water at you as you are reading the script.


I'm definitely going to be able to guess yours.
Posted by: Warren, May 15th, 2021, 6:35pm; Reply: 89

Quoted from Zack
I've got one idea. One HORRIBLE idea. Can't wait to share it. :)


Oh god  ;D
Posted by: LC, May 15th, 2021, 6:42pm; Reply: 90

Quoted from Warren


Hey I had my whacky Place of Worship and dice script produced from that QC :)

And Gary had his jump rope, old age home one produced from the same QC.

I thought you're combos were pretty good, and open until I tried to formulate an idea. I found the round really challenging.

I know!

That's why I thought this'd be a cinch for you all.

Just want to add, if you can get past this bump, Round 3 will be something you all can really get your teeth into and show your talent.

Posted by: MarkD, May 15th, 2021, 7:11pm; Reply: 91
Don't know if I'll be able to get one in or not. No ideas are jumping out at me. We'll see what happens I guess.
Posted by: SAC, May 15th, 2021, 7:56pm; Reply: 92

Quoted from MarkD
Don't know if I'll be able to get one in or not. No ideas are jumping out at me. We'll see what happens I guess.


I wrote my first challenge script in 1/2 an hour, it pretty much got trashed by everyone (deservedly so). I’m sure you can do better than that. Get writing.
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, May 15th, 2021, 7:58pm; Reply: 93
I use Evernote to keep my ideas in, then I can get to it on any online devices.

And I'm in, won't have much time tomorrow so was now or never.

Looking forward to seeing what you talented bunch have come up with this time!
Posted by: Zack, May 15th, 2021, 11:41pm; Reply: 94
Submitted. :)
Posted by: MarkD, May 15th, 2021, 11:59pm; Reply: 95
Do we have to put (c)2021 on the title page? I don't see a rule for it.
Posted by: LC, May 16th, 2021, 12:05am; Reply: 96
That's my omission, Mark.
Main page updated, including that this is an Anon challenge - we all know that, but just in case.

You should always write in the copyright symbol and date. :)

Good for you writing one!
And yay,  Zack too!
Posted by: mmmarnie, May 16th, 2021, 12:10am; Reply: 97
Got home late from a very busy night at work...passed out...now awake and can't fall back asleep so what the heck, I'll try to write something.
Posted by: LC, May 16th, 2021, 12:14am; Reply: 98

Quoted from mmmarnie
Got home late from a very busy night at work...passed out...now awake and can't fall back asleep so what the heck, I'll try to write something.


Terrific, Marnie!
Insomnia has its benefits.
Posted by: MarkD, May 16th, 2021, 12:20am; Reply: 99
Submitted. Very half baked and not very good, but I still got one in regardless.
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 16th, 2021, 1:15am; Reply: 100
If I'm reading that clock correctly, I have until 1pm UK time on Monday? If so I'm going to wait until I'm at work Monday morning, I seem to write better in the office lol

Sounds like this is a survival round just to get to round 3
Posted by: LC, May 16th, 2021, 1:34am; Reply: 101
Matt, sounds about right if you're at 0734 now?
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 16th, 2021, 1:40am; Reply: 102
Yup! Phew, that's a relief lol kids got me busy all weekend so was worried I wouldn't be able to finish it.

But I will, and it's amazing so you should all be trembling with fear  ;D
Posted by: mmmarnie, May 16th, 2021, 1:47am; Reply: 103
WOW!  I wrote something! It sucks! But I'll submit it cus I like to play. And I can't let this be just dudes!!  ;D
Posted by: LC, May 16th, 2021, 1:54am; Reply: 104
Brilliant! On both counts.
Posted by: Andrew, May 16th, 2021, 5:54am; Reply: 105
You're really putting good challenges out there, LC.

Thought the last one was a great challenge. Got through a few from round 1 and will try and do more.

Looking forward to round 2.
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 16th, 2021, 5:56am; Reply: 106
First draft is done. It's 5 pages and I've already cut a few things I wanted to include. Shit!
Posted by: JEStaats, May 16th, 2021, 8:17am; Reply: 107
I've a spark of an idea, at best. This is going to be a close one to get something on paper.
Posted by: Geezis, May 16th, 2021, 9:44am; Reply: 108
Submitted. I had one set up but two completely different endings.
Just hope I have chosen...wisely.
Good luck to everyone entering.
Posted by: Zack, May 16th, 2021, 10:10am; Reply: 109

Quoted from JEStaats
I've a spark of an idea, at best. This is going to be a close one to get something on paper.


Try to be best
‘Cause you're only a man
And a man's gotta learn to take it

Try to believe
Though the going gets rough
That you gotta hang tough to make it

History repeats itself
Try and you'll succeed

Never doubt that you're the one
And you can have your dreams!

You're the best!
Around!
Nothing's gonna ever keep you down
You're the Best!
Around!
Nothing's gonna ever keep you down
You're the Best!
Around!
Nothing's gonna ever keep you down

;D ;D ;D
Posted by: SAC, May 16th, 2021, 10:20am; Reply: 110

Quoted from Zack


Try to be best
‘Cause you're only a man
And a man's gotta learn to take it

Try to believe
Though the going gets rough
That you gotta hang tough to make it

History repeats itself
Try and you'll succeed

Never doubt that you're the one
And you can have your dreams!

You're the best!
Around!
Nothing's gonna ever keep you down
You're the Best!
Around!
Nothing's gonna ever keep you down
You're the Best!
Around!
Nothing's gonna ever keep you down

;D ;D ;D


Wow. I think I’m gonna go run a triathlon now. ;D
Posted by: mmmarnie, May 16th, 2021, 11:51am; Reply: 111
Okay. Submitted. I'm pretty sure mine will be easy to guess.

Can't wait to start reading!! Really enjoyed all the round 1 scripts.

Thanks for this great challenge Don and Libby!!
Posted by: Zack, May 16th, 2021, 2:14pm; Reply: 112
I wonder how if we will have any dropouts this round? And if so, how many?
Posted by: FrankM, May 16th, 2021, 2:30pm; Reply: 113

Quoted from Zack
I wonder how if we will have any dropouts this round? And if so, how many?


I’m trying to get something in. I mean, for once, I’m not starting the second round hopelessly behind.

Dashing of hopes will need to happen this round.
Posted by: PKCardinal, May 16th, 2021, 2:48pm; Reply: 114
I'm in a wrestling match with my script and losing badly right now.

I'll have something in. Not yet confident it'll be any good.

Still have time left, though... so, hope is not yet lost.
Posted by: Zack, May 16th, 2021, 2:52pm; Reply: 115
I know other inspirational songs, if that helps. ;D
Posted by: ReneC, May 16th, 2021, 3:06pm; Reply: 116
Submitted. It isn't great, but it isn't terrible. I know there's still time but I don't know what my day is going to be like, better safe than sorry.
Posted by: irish eyes, May 16th, 2021, 3:49pm; Reply: 117
5 hours to write a script... oh boy
Posted by: FrankM, May 16th, 2021, 3:58pm; Reply: 118

Quoted from irish eyes
5 hours to write a script... oh boy


There's about 15 hours on the timer, though some of that time might not be available to you. I know a lot of mine isn't.
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 16th, 2021, 4:13pm; Reply: 119
Now I have 2 versions of my script (in my head, mostly). One is better, the other better fits the parameters...
Posted by: irish eyes, May 16th, 2021, 5:27pm; Reply: 120

Quoted Text
There's about 15 hours on the timer, though some of that time might not be available to you. I know a lot of mine isn't.


Nope that's why I have only 5 hours :D  now 4 ;D
Posted by: PKCardinal, May 16th, 2021, 5:33pm; Reply: 121
Done.

At least I'll be round 3 eligible.
Posted by: Warren, May 16th, 2021, 7:36pm; Reply: 122
I'm so ready for this to start.
Posted by: Gary in Houston, May 16th, 2021, 7:50pm; Reply: 123
out
Posted by: LC, May 16th, 2021, 7:54pm; Reply: 124
Aww, Gary... Tell me it isn't so.

Ah, hang on, you've another project taking priority, right?
Posted by: LC, May 16th, 2021, 8:01pm; Reply: 125
How's everyone else doing?

Round 3 is going to be a humdinger.
(insert evil laugh, again).
Posted by: Warren, May 16th, 2021, 8:03pm; Reply: 126

Quoted from LC
How's everyone else doing?

Round 3 is going to be a humdinger.
(insert evil laugh, again).


Round 2 was a humdinger!!
Posted by: Zack, May 16th, 2021, 8:09pm; Reply: 127

Quoted from LC
How's everyone else doing?

Round 3 is going to be a humdinger.
(insert evil laugh, again).


You continue to set 'em up, Libby. We'll continue to knock them down!  ;D
Posted by: MarkItZero, May 16th, 2021, 8:14pm; Reply: 128
Barely even started but I just drank a massive cup of coffee at 9 PM. It's gonna ruin me for this entire week but according to Zack's song nothing's gonna ever keep me down!

Also, my back up script was a 1-pager involving an urn filled with fecal matter.
Posted by: Zack, May 16th, 2021, 8:20pm; Reply: 129

Quoted from MarkItZero


Also, my back up script was a 1-pager involving an urn filled with fecal matter.


Sounds like an absolute banger!  ;D
Posted by: JEStaats, May 16th, 2021, 8:28pm; Reply: 130
I sat down to write one story and ended up with something totally different. Whatever. Submitted.
Posted by: MarkItZero, May 17th, 2021, 12:14am; Reply: 131
Submitted!

I should get a medal for trying to shove this much material into four pages.

Honestly wish I'd gone with the poop urn story.
Posted by: LC, May 17th, 2021, 12:55am; Reply: 132
You all deserve medals!

Time for the UK et al to wake up and get cracking for the finish line.  :D

Just a lil bit over six hours to go.
Posted by: spesh2k, May 17th, 2021, 1:57am; Reply: 133
So, I got my 2nd vaccine shot yesterday and felt like complete shit, could barely get out of bed. Then I went to work and, of course because I work at a bar, I couldn't help but have way too much alcohol lol. But somehow, I was able to write something when I got home. It might be the worst thing I've ever written. Fuck it.
Posted by: Yuvraj, May 17th, 2021, 2:12am; Reply: 134
Spent too much time thinking and now I am stuck right after writing just 5 lines. Will I be able to make it?   :-/
Posted by: Bort, May 17th, 2021, 2:14am; Reply: 135
I had an idea early on, but left it last minute to actually write it. Priorities.

Just submitted 5 minutes ago and I'm pretty happy with my entry. Glad to see I'm not the only one writing late at night.

Good luck writers!
Posted by: Warren, May 17th, 2021, 3:08am; Reply: 136
Submitted... Argh!
Posted by: FrankM, May 17th, 2021, 3:21am; Reply: 137
Okay, got something in. Whew.
Posted by: LC, May 17th, 2021, 3:27am; Reply: 138
Bravo, guys.
Hope you make it, Yuvraj.

Wow, all-nighters from some of you.

Round 1 scores (as promised) will go up when the clock rolls over. :)
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 17th, 2021, 4:00am; Reply: 139

Quoted from LC
You all deserve medals!

Time for the UK et al to wake up and get cracking for the finish line.  :D

Just a lil bit over six hours to go.


I think this is the first time I have been awake for the deadline of a challenge, having that clock at the top ticking down is a little unnerving lol

Once again I showed my entry to the other half, she wasn't bored this time, instead, she was utterly bewildered... I've learnt my lesson, don't show it to the other half lol
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 17th, 2021, 5:24am; Reply: 140
This is the first time I've been around near the deadline as well. Just submitted mine. I've had to cut so much from the idea I know folk are going to say it starts too late, ends too abruptly and where is the middle?  I should have gone with my original idea of the Smiler and Frowner from my last entry getting it on for all those who wanted them to hook up.

Ah, well. At least I'm in!

Looking forward to reading what people have come up with.
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 17th, 2021, 5:34am; Reply: 141

Quoted from MarkRenshaw
This is the first time I've been around near the deadline as well. Just submitted mine. I've had to cut so much from the idea I know folk are going to say it starts too late, ends too abruptly and where is the middle?


I guess the real point of these challenges is to inspire us to write, so if your script is one you can work with and market afterwards, then that is already a victory.


Quoted from MarkRenshaw
I should have gone with my original idea of the Smiler and Frowner from my last entry getting it on for all those who wanted them to hook up.


In a bathroom with an Urn of ashes, practically writes itself lol I would watch that... which worries me slightly.
Posted by: Zack, May 17th, 2021, 10:11am; Reply: 142
It's 11:14 AM! I'm ready to read! :P
Posted by: SAC, May 17th, 2021, 10:17am; Reply: 143

Quoted from Zack
It's 11:14 AM! I'm ready to read! :P


Seconded.
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 17th, 2021, 10:18am; Reply: 144

Quoted from Zack
It's 11:14 AM! I'm ready to read! :P


I wondered who would be the first to post this lol

27 entries in round 1... I'm going to guess 23 in round 2
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 17th, 2021, 10:45am; Reply: 145
They are starting to go up!
Posted by: FrankM, May 17th, 2021, 11:15am; Reply: 146

Quoted from MarkRenshaw
They are starting to go up!


They started to appear, but no new ones in a bit. I hope it's not just 15 scripts.
Posted by: Zack, May 17th, 2021, 11:16am; Reply: 147

Quoted from Matthew Taylor


27 entries in round 1... I'm going to guess 23 in round 2


I count 15 entries this round. That's a bigger drop-off than I expected.

EDIT: Don just started posting more! Woot!
Posted by: Matthew Taylor, May 17th, 2021, 11:25am; Reply: 148
I think I count 27... no drop-outs
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, May 17th, 2021, 11:50am; Reply: 149
Blimey. I don't know how I'm going to get through 27 four page scripts! Depends on how long we've got?
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