Morfed by Yuvraj Rajwanshi - Short, Horror - The terrifying times when dissatisfaction leads to extreme measures.  2 pages - pdf format

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Thank you Don for posting.

Gave this a read, Yuvraj. A decent concept for a super-short. Definitely needs to be developed more. Right now it's a twist without a setup. It'd also require a bit of a budget. lol

The writing itself is quite rough and awkward. Quite a few typos as well. Title also seems like a typo. Did you mean "Morphed"? If not, what does "Morfed" mean?

Sorry to come across as so negative, Dude. But this one needs a rewrite.

Nicolas Cage and John Travolta in "face-off" take a step forward.  

Thanks Zack and Barry for reading and commenting.