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Posted by: Don, July 4th, 2021, 12:34pm

Bride To Be by Brandi Self - Short, Sci Fi, Fantasy, Drama - A nervous bride-to-be receives devastating news from her fiancé after getting some last-minute adjustments made to her wedding gown. 3 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: D.A.Banaszak, February 19th, 2023, 6:54pm; Reply: 1

DAMMIT!

Ever since I read “Don’t Call Me Sir”, which had a twist that caught me flat-footed, I have read your work with a keen eye to predict your inevitable twist. I consider it to be somewhat of a game. I think I have been pretty good so far.

However…

I did NOT see the twist coming in this one. Well played and well written.

Posted by: steven8, February 19th, 2023, 8:10pm; Reply: 2

That was a very cool, totally Rod Serling short-with-a-twist. I loved it!

Posted by: Pleb, February 21st, 2023, 2:13pm; Reply: 3

Ha!

That was a fun little read. Good job.

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