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Posted by: Don, August 19th, 2021, 10:02am
Necessary Evil by Adam Rocke - Short, Thriller - A child must commit a horrific crime to prevent a much greater atrocity. 4 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Posted by: SteveClark, September 5th, 2021, 10:34am; Reply: 1
Adam,

Pretty good premise, pretty good story. Not sure if your formatting is entire correct regarding the subtitles “spoken in German” part. Might wanna look into that, but it didn’t really distract my read.

You’ll have a devil of a time getting this made if you’re gonna need 50 plus children — but, a filmmaker could def work around that so no real issue. Period piece clothes would be another issue.

That aside, good work!

Steve
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