Confession by Adam Rocke - Short, Thriller - A troubled young man confronts his past by confessing his sins, but some sins cannot be forgiven. 10 pages - pdf format

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Very inventive. Tense and hard-hitting. Liked how you really sold the horror of him burning with things like...

Creeping into every orifice, every pore.

Burning down to his bones.

Can't find any major things that need to be worked on so well done.