Am I Still The One You Wanted Me To Be? by Jefferson Baugh - Short, Dramedy - A formerly married couple sits down to talk about old wounds, and ones that never healed.  7 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Hello!

I'm Jefferson Baugh, the writer of this script. It's actually been produced - who do I reach out to to add that to the database?

Share a link to the film here in the thread.

Congrats, btw. :)

Jefferson, as Zack said, provide a link, or:

If you want it to appear here: https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1438559016/ PM Don the details (you can see him at the top of this thread, or email webmaster@simplyscripts.com

So, you can find the short film here:

https://youtu.be/g92G0o01VHw?si=AZA4ZAlUHRbV4Gk2

. . .and I'll PM Don the details. Thanks y'all!

It’s decent,  the  characters have some depth which is the most important part of a screenplay in my opinion., however I wish it was a bit longer so we could actually get more scenes of the woman conflicting with her decision and showing some uncertainty and regret.  Also action lines are a bit hard to visualize.  

Not bad not spectacular but it was fine.

Congrats!