Stab: Help! Ghostface! by Vida Bojestig - Short, Horror - Ghostface kills Lily's sister Julia. Later, Lily gets chased by Ghostface too. But she doesn't know who Ghostface is… 32 pages - pdf format

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Vida, congrats on finishing a screenplay. That's no small accomplishment and you should be proud.

There's a lot wrong here. I'd strongly suggest that you read as many properly formatted screenplays as you can. And write, write, write! If you keep reading and keep writing, you will only get better. :)

Hope to see you around on the discussion boards. :)