Hello, Nadine...?
Hopefully you'll see this feedback - and links some of us have posted before.
Your scripts need to be formatted according to Industry Standard formatting.
https://screenwriting.io/what-is-standard-screenplay-format/Free screenplay software:
https://www.scriptreaderpro.com/free-screenwriting-software/There are tons of amateur and professional screenplays to download on this very site.
Handy hints. There are also tons of writer resources on the Internet, including professional screenplays you can download.
https://www.storysense.com/format/description.htm#:~:text=Do%20not%20abbreviate%20%E2%80%9CSUPERIMPOSE%E2%80%9D%20as,least%20one%20sentence%20of%20You're pumping these stories out but very few people are going to read them in their current state.
This:
KERRY
Yeah, well me and Pip are gonna be retiring soon…we need some of that money for our wedding!Should look more like this (below).
KERRY
Yeah, well me and Pip are gonna
be retiring soon. We need some of that
money for our wedding!
You've got big spaces between dialogue and description.
Your scene headers should be written like this:
INT. AEROPLANE - DAY
PIP
Yeah (nods her head).
Should be:
PIP
(nods her head)
Yeah.
Not convinced you need a wrylie there though.
Delete your DISSOLVE TO headers.
Just start a new scene.
Delete ALL CAPS.
Delete your last page, nothing is written on it.
Your title page should be a page on its own and contain your contact info, copyright, and date, at least.
Screenwriting software will enable this easily.
Hope you to see you make an appearance here.
:)