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Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 25th, 2022, 11:22pm
So not to derail the thread about a super quickie, and the double meanings that has, but just wanted to provide a quick update on my TV drama pilot "Bounty," which originally started out years ago as part of a seven week challenge here on SS and was called "Dead Connection" at the time.

It got scrubbed, and re-written, and re-written some more, and entered in several contests, where it did pretty well.  Ultimately it got on Coverfly's Red List for a while and currently it is in the top 1% of all discoverable scripts on the Coverfly site.

I got an email a couple of days ago that "Bounty" had been selected to be performed at a Virtual Live Table Read this coming Friday, July 1st, beginning at 1 pm PST (3 PM CST, 4 PM EST).  This will be done via Zoom and anyone who is invited and has the zoom link can join in and watch.  I will be doing a Q & A following the live read, so you are welcome to ask questions and actually hear an SS member speak in real life!

They will have actors from LA's Storytellers Conservancy performing the script.  I hope to have the Zoom link either Monday or Tuesday and I will post it here as soon as I have it.  Would LOVE to have some SS representation there and actually get to put a face to a name!  Hope you can join!

Gary
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, June 26th, 2022, 2:25am; Reply: 1
Congrats Gary, great news!
Posted by: LC, June 26th, 2022, 6:34am; Reply: 2
Congrats again, Gary!
Think I'll be sleeping when this is all happening.

Hopefully it'll be on tape for viewing later.  8)
Posted by: Grandma Bear, June 26th, 2022, 7:08am; Reply: 3

Quoted from Gary in Houston
So not to derail the thread about a super quickie, and the double meanings that has, but just wanted to provide a quick update on my TV drama pilot "Bounty," which originally started out years ago as part of a seven week challenge here on SS and was called "Dead Connection" at the time.

LOL! It seemed rather dead around here, so I was just trying to liven things up.  ;D

I did not realize your script started out as a seven week challenge. Do you remember which one it was? Did I read it in the past? I started reading it and somehow it seemed familiar. But, I wasn't sure. That is amazing how well you have done with that script! Huge congratulations! I will definitely try to check in on Friday. Do you recommend reading the script first? 8)
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 26th, 2022, 8:27am; Reply: 4

Quoted from Grandma Bear

LOL! It seemed rather dead around here, so I was just trying to liven things up.  ;D

I did not realize your script started out as a seven week challenge. Do you remember which one it was? Did I read it in the past? I started reading it and somehow it seemed familiar. But, I wasn't sure. That is amazing how well you have done with that script! Huge congratulations! I will definitely try to check in on Friday. Do you recommend reading the script first? 8)


Gosh I can't remember which challenge it was -- I'll have to go back and look.  All I remember is that you wouldn't recognize the original entry compared to the current script!

As to whether to read beforehand -- I don't think it matters, really.  I was going to print it out and read along with the actors, but I think I'd rather focus on the actor's takes on the characters, since I already know the script well enough.

Viewer's choice, I guess!
Posted by: MarkRenshaw, June 26th, 2022, 5:15pm; Reply: 5
Congratulations, hearing your screenplay voiced by actors is a wonderful experience and I hope you enjoy it.
Posted by: PKCardinal, June 26th, 2022, 9:34pm; Reply: 6
Oh yeah, that's awesome!

Looking forward to checking it out.

I just re-read the script. I've always liked it, but it's even better now than it was.
Posted by: SAC, June 27th, 2022, 9:10am; Reply: 7
Great news, Gary! Hope this gives it the extra oomph it needs to get rolling further.
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 27th, 2022, 9:49am; Reply: 8
Thanks Mark, Steve and Paul!  Even though I've had some shorts produced, this feels even more exciting to me for some reason.  Maybe it won't lead to anything, but hopefully it'll be a blast to watch.
Posted by: Don, June 27th, 2022, 9:15pm; Reply: 9
Gary,

That is awesome!  Post that link.  I'm still busy with keeping my mother from dying, but I'll try to pop in if I can.

Written in haste,

Best,

Don
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 27th, 2022, 9:51pm; Reply: 10
Oh Don, I’m so sorry to hear that. I know what you’re feeling and sending nothing but good thoughts to you and your family for peace and comfort right now.

Once I have that link will definitely post here.

Gary
Posted by: Warren, June 27th, 2022, 11:26pm; Reply: 11

Quoted from Gary in Houston


Friday, July 1st, beginning at 1 pm PST (3 PM CST, 4 PM EST).  


Gary


I think that's 6am Saturday here in Sydney. Will try my best to check it out.
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 28th, 2022, 9:19am; Reply: 12

Quoted from Warren


I think that's 6am Saturday here in Sydney. Will try my best to check it out.


Thanks Warren!  Send Libby a wake up call as well!   ;D
Posted by: eldave1, June 28th, 2022, 11:37am; Reply: 13
Very cool! Congrats!
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 28th, 2022, 12:00pm; Reply: 14
Thanks Dave!
Posted by: PKCardinal, June 28th, 2022, 3:24pm; Reply: 15
You gonna sneak in an appearance for the SS mug? Or will your legal team advise against it?
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 28th, 2022, 4:26pm; Reply: 16

Quoted from PKCardinal
You gonna sneak in an appearance for the SS mug? Or will your legal team advise against it?


Haha!  Now this is a VERY good idea!  I may have to find a way to make that happen!
Posted by: Don, June 28th, 2022, 10:07pm; Reply: 17
Or, you could use a stunt mug...

j/k

If it can't happen, just *say* that there is a very subtle homage to SS in the pilot.

It'll keep me busy for a while.

Best,

Don
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 29th, 2022, 8:02pm; Reply: 18
Okay! I have the zoom link for the table read coming up this Friday, July 1st beginning at 1 PM PST  (3 PM CST, 4 PM EST, and apparently for those of you in Australia, 6 am -- but I don't know if that's Friday or Saturday!)

Here’s the link to the zoom:
storytellerszoom.com

Long link in case you need it: https://us02web.zoom.us/j/3108660097?pwd=RkNRMW5xbDRKaWRwN0ZseXZwRTN4Zz09

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Don's edit
Link to revised script https://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?m-1442891822/s-0/
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You'll have to copy and paste in your browser whichever link you use as I am incapable of figuring out how to make the links work from and don't want to screw them up!

Also, make sure if you do join that your camera and audio to your computer is turned off.  By that I mean, no one can see or hear you during the presentation.  I don't know whether it will be opened up to the audience for the Q & A afterwards or if that will be a just a back and forth between me and the actors.

Each of the actors/actresses have had some past TV or movie experience -- while not household names, these aren't people in acting school, they're actual professionals, so that's exciting in and of itself.

Here are the actors/actresses that will be performing if you want to check out their iMDB's:

Wasim No'wani (main lead character)
Kassandra Rosales
zeke Alton
Shaan Sharma
Kevin Palafox
Catherine Lidstone

These actors (with the exception of Wasim) will be playing multiple roles, so it might be helpful to have the script to follow along with.  I'm going to send the latest version of the script to Don and see if he can post it in this thread so you can download and read along if you'd like.

The email I got says it will go from 1-4 pm PST (3 hours), but I can't believe that's really going to be the case.  The script is only 53 pages, so my guess it will take them about 1 and 1/2 to read through the script and another 30 minutes or so for Q & A.   But even  if  you can only join for a little while, I hope you can make it, just to see my ugly mug (meaning my face and not the SS mug, which I'm really going to try and sneak into an appearance!).

Thank you everyone for your support!

Gary
Posted by: LC, June 30th, 2022, 1:37am; Reply: 19
Gary, I'm pretty sure that's Saturday for us in Oz.
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 30th, 2022, 8:01am; Reply: 20
Libby, I told Warren to give you a wake up call!
;D
Posted by: LC, June 30th, 2022, 8:13am; Reply: 21
  ;D ;D ;D ;D
If only it were Summer here.
I'm hoping I can dip in just a little bit later, or can you only sign in on the dot?
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 30th, 2022, 9:30am; Reply: 22
I think you can come and go as you need to.
Posted by: LC, June 30th, 2022, 6:25pm; Reply: 23
Excellent! Will try to be there.
You must be excited, Gary.  8)
Posted by: Warren, June 30th, 2022, 6:27pm; Reply: 24

Quoted from Gary in Houston
Libby, I told Warren to give you a wake up call!
;D


Oh damn, I missed this!! :)
Posted by: Gary in Houston, June 30th, 2022, 6:39pm; Reply: 25

Quoted from Warren


Oh damn, I missed this!! :)


Ha!  No you didn't miss anything -- it's tomorrow (your Saturday) from about 6 - 9 am Oz time.  So you can still give Libby her wake-up call!
Posted by: Gary in Houston, July 1st, 2022, 10:44am; Reply: 26
T minus 4 hours -- hope you can join!

Gary
Posted by: Grandma Bear, July 1st, 2022, 11:42am; Reply: 27
I don't seem to be able to get the zoom thing going. Is it because I'm early?
Posted by: Grandma Bear, July 1st, 2022, 1:17pm; Reply: 28
I must be stupid, but I could not get it going. I saw Rick on screen, but that was it. Really strange. :-/
Posted by: Gary in Houston, July 1st, 2022, 1:22pm; Reply: 29
Pia, you're a bit early.  It doesn't start until 3 pm CST, 4 pm EST.  Come back in a little while!
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 3:00pm; Reply: 30
The mug is in the house!!!!!!
Posted by: Warren, July 1st, 2022, 3:43pm; Reply: 31
Hi Gary,

I tried but the meeting host keeps removing me :/

Anyway, I hope it's all going well and hopefully there will be a recorded copy you can share.

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Congrats again!
Posted by: Warren, July 1st, 2022, 3:48pm; Reply: 32
Okay, I'm in!

Posted by: Warren, July 1st, 2022, 4:33pm; Reply: 33
Very cool, Kevin Palafox and Wasim No'wani were awesome!


Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 4:34pm; Reply: 34

Quoted from Warren
Very cool, Kevin Palafox and Wasimnomani were awesome!




Agreed! Thought Kevin was a standout for sure.
Posted by: LC, July 1st, 2022, 4:36pm; Reply: 35
Aww, is it over already?
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 4:36pm; Reply: 36
Wasim's vocal quality really added an interesting element to the character. Fun to see.
Posted by: Warren, July 1st, 2022, 4:36pm; Reply: 37

Quoted from PKCardinal


Agreed! Thought Kevin was a standout for sure.


The scene changes and wardrobe changes were a nice touch.
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 4:37pm; Reply: 38

Quoted from LC
Aww, is it over already?


Just getting ready for the q and a. They'll be sending Gary the recorded video. I bet he'll share if you're interested.

It was a cool experience. I could really see the value to having that done for a script.
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 4:38pm; Reply: 39

Quoted from Warren


The scene changes and wardrobe changes were a nice touch.


Agreed.

Cool that all the actors took it so seriously.
Posted by: Warren, July 1st, 2022, 4:40pm; Reply: 40
Hey Gary,

Just for the script, For consistency I'd bold the mini headings as well if you are going to bold the main ones... just a thought :)

So things like: BATHROOM, STUDY etc.

Really enjoyed it.
Posted by: LC, July 1st, 2022, 4:42pm; Reply: 41

Quoted from PKCardinal


Just getting ready for the q and a. They'll be sending Gary the recorded video. I bet he'll share if you're interested.

It was a cool experience. I could really see the value to having that done for a script.

Is the q and a able to be listened to?
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 4:44pm; Reply: 42

Quoted from LC

Is the q and a able to be listened to?


Yes, you click the link, then they'll have to approve you to join.

It's the actors, director, Gary and a handful of SSers.
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 4:46pm; Reply: 43

Quoted from LC

Is the q and a able to be listened to?


They are also recording it.
Posted by: LC, July 1st, 2022, 4:46pm; Reply: 44
Cool. Thanks PK. :)
Posted by: LC, July 1st, 2022, 4:51pm; Reply: 45
Okay, I keep getting removed. I wonder if this is a name thing as my married name is on Zoom.
Will have to wait till everything comes out later?
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 5:02pm; Reply: 46

Quoted from LC
Okay, I keep getting removed. I wonder if this is a name thing as my married name is on Zoom.
Will have to wait till everything comes out later?


They mentioned that the link is also for another meeting later, so a bunch of people are trying to join the wrong meeting. They're culling, trying to keep them out. You probably got caught up in that.
Posted by: LC, July 1st, 2022, 5:05pm; Reply: 47

Quoted from PKCardinal


They mentioned that the link is also for another meeting later, so a bunch of people are trying to join the wrong meeting. They're culling, trying to keep them out. You probably got caught up in that.


I'll just wait for the recording now cause can't get on.
Thanks Paul! Much appreciated.
Posted by: PKCardinal, July 1st, 2022, 5:08pm; Reply: 48

Quoted from LC


I'll just wait for the recording now cause can't get on.
Thanks Paul! Much appreciated.


No problem. Sorry you couldn't get in.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, July 1st, 2022, 5:22pm; Reply: 49
I raised my hand three times to ask Gary questions, but was not allowed to ask or they didn't notice. Then I had to leave.

Yes, Kevin was a standout! It also helps when they change outfits and backgrounds for those of us who are watching, but don't know the material. Helps keeping the characters separate.

Congrats Gary! Awesome cliffhanger too!!!

My questions were:

After having heard the table read, are there anything you feel you definitely need to tweak or change?

Is there any difference in writing a pilot vs a feature? Anything specific to keep in mind?

PS: Inge is the male version of Inga...
Posted by: Gary in Houston, July 1st, 2022, 5:43pm; Reply: 50
Hey everyone!!  We did it!  Boy, that was nerve-wracking!

Thanks everyone who tuned in -- Kevin, I know you tried to join but I think the moderator stopped letting people in at some point.  

I'll try to share the recording once of the whole read and the Q&A once they send to me.

Oh, and Don, thanks for putting the info up for people to be able to join in!

Fun stuff!
Posted by: LC, July 1st, 2022, 5:46pm; Reply: 51
Big Congrats, Gary!!

Zoom didn't want to let me in sadly.
Looking forward to the replay! :)
Posted by: Gary in Houston, July 1st, 2022, 5:51pm; Reply: 52

Quoted from LC
Big Congrats, Gary!!

Zoom didn't want to let me in sadly.
Looking forward to the replay! :)


No worries Libby! It was a ton of fun and I'll send you the recording when it comes my way!
Posted by: Gary in Houston, July 1st, 2022, 5:55pm; Reply: 53
Oh, and most importantly, not only did the mug make it onscreen, but i got to give SS a shout out at the beginning!
Posted by: Don, July 2nd, 2022, 3:11pm; Reply: 54

Quoted from Gary in Houston
Oh, and most importantly, not only did the mug make it onscreen, but i got to give SS a shout out at the beginning!


Thanks for that Gary!

- Don
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