Unusual Visitor by Frankshiva - Short, Horror, Thriller - THERASA who compares or feels reality with Cinema ( Movie ) What happened to her is the climax. 6 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

I'm guessing that English isn't your primary language.

Right away your logline is confusing.

I tried to read the first page but the format was wrong, grammar was wrong, and the script was difficult to read.

I suggest reading some books on script format for starters then rewrite your script.
Format isn't everything, but when it's so far from the norm, it hurts to read it.

Good luck.

-Jordan