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Posted by: Don, July 17th, 2022, 7:48pm
Night Call by Jack Coleman - Short, Horror - An Uber Eats drivers life is turned upside down during a mundane delivery. 17 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work
Posted by: Nomad, July 18th, 2022, 12:39pm; Reply: 1
Here are my notes from page 1.
It doesn't look good so far regarding format and readability.

The story may be good, but it'll be hard to get past page 1 without cleaning things up a bit.

Page 1

-Jordan
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