Happy Birthday by Frank B. Hansen - Short, Comedy - How could a pre-teen boy's family forget his birthday? 3 pages - pdf format

Writer interested in feedback on this work

Ahoy Frank

For what it's worth, and bearing in mind that everybody has different tastes and sense(s) of humor:

Clean and simple. Like black and white. I thought it was good for what it was. It made me smile, and made me chuckle.

It would be easy to film.

Best of Irish luck. :)_ghostie gal

Hey, ghostie gal,

Thanks for the Irish luck and peeking in.
If chuckle worthy, I'm happy.

Thanks,
Frank

What a elegantly written screenplay.Your use of few words to write Happy birthday screenplay was enjoyable to read.

Hey, Ani.

Thanks for checking in.
Glad you liked Happy Birthday.

Frank