Loving Mary by Mbako Letlhomo  - Thriller, Drama - A dedicated writer relocates to a city to write a compelling novel and meets an intriguing and mysterious woman who lures him him in to a gothic roller-coaster. While he attempts to get away with a terrible crime, and away from her, they are investigated by a tough Detective that also has skeletons in his closet. 117 pages - pdf format

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Intresting thrilling story, tho Brad is a creep too as his Mary! They definately worth of each other lol! Brad should have dropped Mary after that "water torture", it would save his mental health and people's lives

I appreciate you reading my script, you would be surprised that even in the re-write, that's the only scene that was stubborn to evaporate.