Sundays with Ethel by Jason Allen - Short, Drama, Dramedy - An elderly man and woman cross paths while visiting the graves of their departed spouses. Sparks don't exactly fly, but sometimes a simple connection is enough. 8 pages - pdf format

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What a lovely story, Jason.
I liked Baxter. Really liked him. He's a gentle soul with a lot to say,
even if it's only about tuna fish sandwich, his trusted harmonica, a giraffe,  
hula hoops and a frisbee.
I like Baxter because he's trying to connect with the world... without his
beloved Ethel.

And Nellie, she's just right. Sweet, but not too sweet.
She doesn't say much, but she's just right.
Maybe Baxter and Nellie will cross paths again. I hope...

I liked these two so much, I might come back next Sunday.
2 p.m. sharp.