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Posted by: Don, September 6th, 2022, 4:45pm

Dry Dock Drunks of Nob Hill by David Seader - Drama - Who pays the Groundskeeper, Evan? It's the Butler Tim’s son Jon who does. The keys belong to Jon's best friend Brandan. 84 pages - pdf format

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Posted by: Stoneyscripts, September 14th, 2022, 12:02pm; Reply: 1

Cut to - not Fade in:? This is the first time I've seen that in a script.

How not to begin a script.

Defer to cliche during dialogue.

I'm done, I can't go on.

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