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Posted by: Don, September 24th, 2022, 4:09pm
Ruesday by D.S.G. - Short, Horror - A woman was found guilty in court and undergoes hideous torture before her stint in prison. 1 page - pdf format
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Posted by: Stoneyscripts, September 25th, 2022, 12:50pm; Reply: 1
You got me here. I haven't a Scooby-do what this is or what you are trying to put out there.
You capitalize ASSUMED SUSPECT, but not Woman in chains.
I don't know about a court in operation at night, unless it's a Monkey Court.
This thing with the baby - we - you?
Just saying.
Posted by: ColinS, September 29th, 2022, 12:26pm; Reply: 2
Think it took me twenty-five seconds to read, so thanks for that.
Interesting piece.
Kinda in the Scooby Doo camp though.
Cheers
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