Shortly after arriving in a small desert town, two men involved in shady business realize they cannot leave, and must fight to survive the night.

I wrote this some years ago but recently came back and revamped some of it. I'm interested in general feedback, and the correct usage of "Continuous," which I believe should apply to pages 4-5. My intention is to turn this into a feature with a tone similar to Eight Legged Freaks.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VUPevLbFaBUL794RKpjsylx6OTBHyElK/view?usp=share_link