Fantasy/Action/Adventure

Logline (temporary): A fierce Amazon warrior must choose between loyalty to her queen or joining forces with a group of rebel men to overthrow her tyrannical leader and defeat the god that controls her kingdom.

This is the first thing I ever wrote so I am looking for any feedback whether on the format, dialogues or the content/story. Not sure if this is interesting enough as a cold open? Thanks!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PbgdQTtDApJshOk2bZiUTbNbT02wtIVC/view?usp=sharing